This is awesome.. but question.. should the facebook link be on it instead of the blog link? cos im thinking the blog has stuff on here that only we need to know, and facebook has all the info for the public and our friends and family..
I think this looks great but with the whole thing being red it might get expensive with printing? Black and white will be equally as effective, maybe some red text or something?
I agree with the above comments. You need to take into consideration that if you say follow us on facebook, that you need to put the link somewhere as they will have no idea what to search. Also the background being red, that might need to come into consideration when printing. I think the texts could be a bit bigger and take up a bit more room, just so the poster doesn't look to crowded but not to spaced.
Good point Erin, we dont really need comments from people not in our class ... I like the red (in your face) but having a BW alternative with small amounts of colour would be advantageous. I love the SHH, clever ;-> Ummm I dont even know how to follow us on facebook Brett.
Wow! That looks really awesome! I'm really starting to look forward to the exhibition! I agree with the above statements too, though in saying that I would change the red, but not just to black and white, just maybe change it to some other colour that isn't too bright, we still want this thing to stand out to people just not in an overwhelming way.
Yeah it's simple and effective and I haven't seen the touch of adding the train line before - cute. I actually liked the red because it's so all-out but the printing comment sounds about right. Also I agree with replacing the blogspot with the facebook.
i like this poster aswell but i agree with the other comments i think the back ground should be white and maybe the SHH bit could be red to make it stand out. and also the face book thing. very nice poster good work Rikki-lea
I love this :) I agree need to put facebook link instead of blog
use the link from the event page I made for the exhibition on fb :) if you look at the comments posted under the advertising post I did on Tuesday, rebekka has posted the link to the event page for fb :)
I also prefer this image though like Jas am concerned with the cost involved in printing a red background, Perhaps we are able to print on red paper to cut on costs.
I also think that the bathrooms around tafe would be a great place to post these teasers.
yeah~ guys i agree about the facebook. but i need some help with the facebook connection. i'm not sure about it.... the color i will work on some alternative colors and texts.... u guys can suggest which is the better one. i will put up on sunday... thanks for your feed back. i really do appreciate it...~~ jung eun
This is awesome.. but question.. should the facebook link be on it instead of the blog link? cos im thinking the blog has stuff on here that only we need to know, and facebook has all the info for the public and our friends and family..
ReplyDeleteI really like this, good work
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I think this looks great but with the whole thing being red it might get expensive with printing? Black and white will be equally as effective, maybe some red text or something?
ReplyDeleteCheers, Jasmin P
I agree with the above comments. You need to take into consideration that if you say follow us on facebook, that you need to put the link somewhere as they will have no idea what to search. Also the background being red, that might need to come into consideration when printing. I think the texts could be a bit bigger and take up a bit more room, just so the poster doesn't look to crowded but not to spaced.
ReplyDeleteCheers, Maddison.
Good point Erin, we dont really need comments from people not in our class ... I like the red (in your face) but having a BW alternative with small amounts of colour would be advantageous. I love the SHH, clever ;-> Ummm I dont even know how to follow us on facebook
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Wow! That looks really awesome! I'm really starting to look forward to the exhibition! I agree with the above statements too, though in saying that I would change the red, but not just to black and white, just maybe change it to some other colour that isn't too bright, we still want this thing to stand out to people just not in an overwhelming way.
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Yeah it's simple and effective and I haven't seen the touch of adding the train line before - cute. I actually liked the red because it's so all-out but the printing comment sounds about right. Also I agree with replacing the blogspot with the facebook.
ReplyDeleteAlex
I really like this one.
ReplyDeletemaybe not have the whole background red. black and white would be lovely toooo x)
nice job!!!!
Ann-Marie
i like this poster aswell but i agree with the other comments i think the back ground should be white and maybe the SHH bit could be red to make it stand out. and also the face book thing. very nice poster good work
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I love this :) I agree need to put facebook link instead of blog
ReplyDeleteuse the link from the event page I made for the exhibition on fb :) if you look at the comments posted under the advertising post I did on Tuesday, rebekka has posted the link to the event page for fb :)
- Melissa ball :)
(mel ball on fb)
heck yeah that is the bees knees! nice one
ReplyDeletegraham
I like. I like alot.
ReplyDeleteI personally like the poster but i just do not like the camera as a sketching i would prefer it to be like this one
ReplyDeletehttp://secretsexhibit.blogspot.com/2010/04/teaser-post.html
I also prefer this image though like Jas am concerned with the cost involved in printing a red background, Perhaps we are able to print on red paper to cut on costs.
ReplyDeleteI also think that the bathrooms around tafe would be a great place to post these teasers.
Valentina
yeah~ guys i agree about the facebook. but i need some help with the facebook connection. i'm not sure about it....
ReplyDeletethe color i will work on some alternative colors and texts....
u guys can suggest which is the better one. i will put up on sunday...
thanks for your feed back. i really do appreciate it...~~ jung eun
I love it!
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